Services for Writers

Download the story rubric I use with all my clients to analyze and diagnose your manuscript. Click the red button.

A Set of Fresh Eyes

How do you know if your book works?

It’s hard to tell when we are so close to our own words. Plus, we’ve been looking at the thing for so long.

It’s time for a fresh set of eyes.

After reading and dissecting your manuscript, I’ll be able to show you where you can improve your work, making it the very best you can.

After our 60-minute follow-up Zoom call, I’ll be available to you via unlimited email for any further clarification and support you might need.

Book your Story Diagnostic here.

Story Diagnostic

$6.25/page

  • Thoughtful read of your entire manuscript

  • Completed Story Rubric (download the free template) covering: Genre, Character, Worldbuilding, Wants & Needs, Showing vs. Telling, Passive Voice, Theme, The Three Cs

  • 60-minute Zoom call to discuss your manuscript

  • Audio and video recording of 60-minute Zoom call

  • Unlimited follow-up email communication

  • Free Digital Download of THREE STORY METHOD

Line Edits

$5.25/page

  • Thoughtful read of your entire manuscript TWICE

  • Sentence-by-sentence attention, looking for:

    • passive voice

    • word choice

    • typos

    • structure

    • repetitive words or phrasing

    • readability

    • continuity

Book Coaching

$500/4 sessions

  • Meet weekly for instruction, brainstorming, accountability, and feedback in the following areas:

    • outlining

    • story structure

    • story rubric

    • marketing/promotion

    • publication